You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Give details of your study plan
• Explain why you want to get a part-time job
• Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear David,
It has been so long since we last were in touch but I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to ask you for a favour which is assisting me to get a part-time job during my staying in your country. Actually, I have enrolled at an institution called Elite in order to study Finance as post-graduate studies. The course will be for 6 months and it has 2 semesters. Moreover, the course not only enhances my professional career but also promote my job level.
Basically, the reason for asking you to have a part-time job is to cover my daily expenses such as rental accommodation, foods, drinks and transportation fees. You know that the life in the capital city is a very expensive.
I would, therefore, appreciate using your connections among your friends and colleagues in order to help me to have a part-time job. I will not mind at all either if I have a casual work or temporary employment. I would be so grateful.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Paula
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a casual work or temporary employment. I would be so grateful. I look forward...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... employment. I would be so grateful. I look forward to seeing you soon. Best ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58011049724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8156422057 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4074154941 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322748759964 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971015754981 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798859440613 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181582462711 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288744322757 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.