In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are people who think that having their offspring when they are older is the best choice to make. Because society’s changes like giving more opportunities to women to have jobs and improve career-wise may be the reasons to make this decision. The benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Women have the opportunities to apply and get different type of jobs unlike years ago; therefore, people do not consider having children the first priority on their lives anymore. For instance, the number of women who are housewife has reduced lately, because now they can also be an economic support for their household by applying to jobs and working as the men have used to do always.
On the other hand, education regulations have also changed in most of the countries in order to give women the chance to study and get technical or professional degrees to serve the community and work to fulfill themselves. Universities, for example, are the proof that women have continued their studies after finishing high school and it supports the idea of women having children at older ages after finalizing their career studies.
In regards to the aforementioned, the benefits exceed the disadvantages, these last could be relating to the advanced aged when the women decide to have a baby. Consequently, babies could born with deformities to which the medical advances have reduced this risk and would probably keep doing so until this will no longer be a problem. In saying so, women’s improvement on social opportunities and respect about their rights outweigh the cons.
To conclude, people are deciding to have children when they are older, because the women are taking a different role on society and the education opportunities which highlight their purposes on life exceed the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...more. For instance, the number of women who are housewife has reduced lately, because n...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...ter finalizing their career studies. In regards to the aforementioned, the benefits exceed...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have born' or 'bear'?
Suggestion: have born; bear
...have a baby. Consequently, babies could born with deformities to which the medical a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19795221843 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83959044369 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1615209039 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285957604602 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11298341088 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494028939428 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166015457376 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387703069859 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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