You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
Explain who you are
Describe your complaint
Say what you think should be done about it.
Dear Manager,
You are a regular customer at a supermarket in your town/city. You have recently noticed a problem with some of the products that you usually buy and you have decided to complain about this.
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction based on some of the items I recently purchased from the newyork supermarket on the 20th Jan 2017.
Firstly, being a patron of this supermarket for about 5 years now. I prefer to buy all the necessary items from your store and most of my friend even have tried your store based on my recommendation. I purchased some of the accessories for my mobile and laptop, on the 20th January 2017.
Secondly, upon unboxing, I found the equipment’s to be defective because I cannot hear the sound from the earphones and the charger proved to be useless because of its inability to charge my laptop.
Thirdly, I expect you to either kindly replace the defective pieces or return the money back to me. I would also like to advise you to repeal and replace the defective items to avoid unavoidable circumstances in the future.
Best
Faizal
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| 2017-02-05 | FaizalReza | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8167539267 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86226109601 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5529010251 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447586692565 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171376748341 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226841848884 0.0667982634062 340% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246589017467 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.324567534945 0.056905535591 570% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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