Topic 7: Many people believe that children should be educated by nature while others think it wastes their time and they should only study in their school? Which is your opinion ?
Nowadays, creating opportunities for children to learn within nature is the heated controversial issue. Many people argue that this is extraordinary part of life for children while others think children shoud only concentrate on studying in their school. Personally, I strongly agree with first opinion.
On the one hand, training kids in mother nature is the way to improve their awareness of safeguarding the environment from damage. In fact, if children are allowed to contact with nature place, they will understand deeply about the flora and fauna. This not only help children appreciate the great impact of natural world to human life but also subconsciously formed the love and the guard for it. As a result, the society will develop generation but also protecting the environment before human encroachment, this is only possible with such methods.
On the other hand, forcing children to study so much rather than running wild in the woods and fields is counter-productive. According to many researches in several nations, children’s brain are more creative , fantastic and observable when they exposure to the natural space. Moreover, when parents encourage their children to play outdoor and explore the wildlife, the proportions of kids regularly playing indoor will decrease rapidly. Consequently, many deseases in kids such as obesity, deficit disorder,… will be controlled than ever before.
In conclusion, nature are appropriately important to educate children , not only which provides ecological intelligence but also developes their health and consciousness of defending natural world from harm.
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- Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of works and school should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects To what extent do you agree 64
- Many people believe that children should be educated by nature while others think it wastes their time and they should only study in their school? Which is your opinion ? 56
- Topic 7: Many people believe that children should be educated by nature . Which is your opinion ? 56
- Topic 7: Many people believe that children should be educated by nature while others think it wastes their time and they should only study in their school? Which is your opinion ? 56
- Topic 4: Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivities for instance in zoo. Other people say that there are benefits for these animals and human. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your personal view. 96
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60975609756 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08603438422 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630081300813 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1797435889 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302957249604 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100618366306 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083218642729 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187232564854 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631727492708 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.