The table shows the maximum, minimum, and average monthly salaries in a European country in five employment sector in 2009,
The table compares the amount of salaries paid by five major career sector per month in a European country in 2009.
It is clear from the given table that Finance sector was considerably higher than others in terms of maximum, minimum and average monthly salary. While construction minimum salary was by far smallest, maximum and average wages of Hotels sector were smallest compared to four other sectors in the year surveyed.
Finance field paid 7450 Euro to staff monthly to the maximum, which was the highest number of five sectors, followed by trnasport, which paid 5480 Euro max. Hotels sector, in contrast, paid only less than a third of that salary of finance.
The smallest amount of salary was also largest in finance field, where 1334 Euro were paid every month, whilst other sectors' wages ranged from 817 Euro of construction sector to over 960 Euro of manufacturing field.
Average salary of finance was also by far highest in the same year surveyed, with 2560 Euro monthly, while the lowest amount of average salary fell to Hotels sector, with just over 1250 Euro.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...t of salaries paid by five major career sector per month in a European country in 2009...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...ar surveyed. Finance field paid 7450 Euro to staff monthly to the maximum, which ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'max' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'maces', 'maxes'.
Suggestion: maces; maxes
...owed by trnasport, which paid 5480 Euro max. Hotels sector, in contrast, paid only ...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...so largest in finance field, where 1334 Euro were paid every month, whilst other sec...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...lst other sectors wages ranged from 817 Euro of construction sector to over 960 Euro...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...Euro of construction sector to over 960 Euro of manufacturing field. Average sala...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Euros'.
Suggestion: Euros
...l to Hotels sector, with just over 1250 Euro.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26171424132 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3447427747 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340319566325 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1869196648 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113434771081 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216527596728 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125808225338 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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