The maps demonstrate some changes of an island made by the building of tourist facilities.
The maps demonstrate some changes of an island made by the building of tourist facilities.
In general, over a period of time, the island grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. In spite of the apearance of accomodations and traffic, green trees remain intact all around the island.
Specifically, 100 metres to the northest of the island, while there had been only a small group of trees before the development, dense clusters of accomodations mushroomed after the tourism appeared there. Along with that, two systems of footpaths connecting houses were built, one of which lied in the middle of the island and the other to the east.
Likewise, between two house clusters came into being a reception surrounded by a vehicle track crossing this area from south to north. Not only did the northeast witness the construction of a restaurant to meet the demand of growing population, but the beach in the east was used as a swimming area as well. Moreover, by virtue of the appearance of a pear to the south did travelling become easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tourist facilities. In general, over a period of time, the island grew as the transport infra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'travel'
Suggestion: travel
...e appearance of a pear to the south did travelling become easier.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, in general, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92655367232 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86115662675 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7332905131 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265076795459 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147466195501 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.322939357699 0.0843802449381 383% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281046088203 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.415916072044 0.0819641961636 507% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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