You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Jale, I have encountered with a minor accident in the supermarket and I hope you can help me with this one.
As I turned myself in a corner, another customer rushed right into my face and I got hurt so badly straight to the ground. Although that young man apologised to me and I accepted it, I found out similar cases happen all the time so that every time you have to be slow and careful enough to protect yourself from blind corners.
As a customer, I sincerely hope I can be a part of improving the shopping environment. There are too many blind spots in the supermarket, hence a lot of danger is existing within these blind spots. To create more transparency in every lane, some extra penetrated holes on shelters can give customers more information about the surroundings, therefore a lot of blind spots can be minimized to reduce the danger.
Kind Regards,
Jale
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 61
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 61
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jale, I have encountered with...
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... I hope you can help me with this one. As I turned myself in a corner, anot...
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...o protect yourself from blind corners. As a customer, I sincerely hope I ca...
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...n be minimized to reduce the danger. Kind Regards, Jale
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...duce the danger. Kind Regards, Jale
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60122699387 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68229390465 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7285697483 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137438194121 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532914333199 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708519782426 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109430178199 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087518498839 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.