Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Young people enjoy life more than elder people do.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Life is important to all creatures on the earth. Enjoying life will make us stand over all the problems and troubles that may disappointed us. Some people think that young people are having more fun with their lives rather than the elder; others do not. In my opinion, I believe that enjoying live is not affected by the age for a couple of reasons.
First, I think that the people’s soul plays an important role in how they live. Some people have a good spirit which is not related to age and they know how to enjoy life even in a simple way. For example, last week I went with my family to had dinner at Friday’s restaurant. While we were waiting for our order, I saw a couple of elder persons setting alone at the other side. I observed how they were enjoying their time together and having a wonderful talk. Personally, I hope to keep enjoying my life like them when I grow up.
Second, sometimes the personality and qualities of the person will affect his or her behavior. A cheerful person may enjoy life better than the bored one either he is old or young person.. For instance, when I was at high school, I was invited to my friend’s birthday. I remembered that we all had fun except her brother. He always was sitting alone. We were all dancing, jumping and sometimes telling jokes and he did not share with us anything. Unlike her parent, they were so friendly and share with us every moment. As you can see, he is just a young boy and did not know how to enjoy his life.
In conclusion, enjoying life is not related if you are old or young, rich or poor, have a good health or not but it is about the way how to enjoy life. Live is wonderful to live and it is fill of joy and love. So everyone has to enjoy it.
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Sentence: Enjoying life will make us stand over all the problems and troubles that may disappointed us.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to may and disappointed
Sentence: For example, last week I went with my family to had dinner at Friday's restaurant.
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Suggestion: Refer to to and had
Sentence: Live is wonderful to live and it is fill of joy and love.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and fill
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