Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this view point?
Nowadays helping charity is a highly fashionable grand gesture which has led some to believe that this has to be a must for everyone. It seems to me that helping charity with money is rather an ethical question rather than an obligation.
Firstly, people work to earn money and that makes them entitled to what they have earned. This gives them the right to decide how to spend it or what to spend it on. This is a right no one can rob people of even with good intentions. Furthermore, no one can determine whether earners need their earned income themselves or they have some extra to spend other ways. Finally, money is not the only possible way to help charity. This means people can come up with numerous methods to assist these foundations rather than being obliged to give up a share of their money against their will. Hardly does the idea of being forced into doing something sounds pleasing to anyone. Admittedly extorting money from people is not a really prestigious way to help these institutions.
While it may be correct that allocating a fixed sum of anyone’s income to charity is a truly brilliant idea, it still appears to be the case, however, that this extremely precious gesture is only valuable if people do it willingly.
To conclude, the idea of imposing a positive act on people tends to be unappealing. Supporting charity is sensible if only people mean to do it, otherwise not only would it be seen just something similar to tax which is not pleasant, but also it would be abhorred shortly defying the nature of charity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72161172161 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56085613426 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8051492224 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130623487054 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433327160002 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354182817795 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727625938876 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371119824091 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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