Nowadays, in some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons and recommendaion to the situation.
It is commonly believed that in some parts of the world, most adults tend to give priority to having children later than in previous decades. This essay will point out some of the factor influencing the change and how it effects the society as a whole.
To begin with, as the whole societies are on the verge of development, so the cost of products and services are increased significantly. In particular, tremendous financial burdens on young couples will cause difficult challenges. Therefore, it is reasonable that they will postpone the decision of having a child until they manage to reach betterment financial. Moreover, it is also an undeniable fact that women are afraid of giving birth before they succeed in constant salary.In addition , both genders will eventually come to an agreement to delay having a child.
On the other hand, there are still some unexpected risks of having a child late. It is being proven by scientists that having child after 40 years old will have more chances of damaging the fetus and also the mother. To solve this problem, there is one reasonable solution for this crucial situation, and that the government should double the salary of each month for women when she appraches giving birth-process.
In conclusion, each parents and individuals should first consider their financial before decide to have children. In this way, they will not be a burden for the society and still taking care of all the family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67572735307 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610655737705 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6179137914 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.272727273 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169345910043 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620524780235 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508590551449 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101673083911 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447053072184 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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