The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at provided charts reveals significant comparison of age groups in two distinct countries (namely Yemen and Italy). Initial statistics are concerning 2000 and some predictions about the ages of the ages of the populations are made referring to 2050.
It is apparent from the charts people whore were under consisted half of the population of Yemen in 2000. 46.3% and a negligible 3.6% of Yemen population were 15-59 and 60 and over respectively. However, following a half century is assessed to bring staggering alteration of dominant positions in Yemen population. Proliferation from 46.3...
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Sentence: Initial statistics are concerning 2000 and some predictions about the ages of the ages of the populations are made referring to 2050.
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Sentence: It is apparent from the charts people whore were under consisted half of the population of Yemen in 2000. 46.3% and a negligible 3.6% of Yemen population were 15-59 and 60 and over respectively.
Suggestion: You may re-write this sentence.
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