Prompt: We need Zoos. Do you agree or disagree? Why? Give examples and reasons to develop your opinion.
In my opinion, a zoo is a must for any city that aims to have its citizens develop the love for nature and animals. The hectic and busy city life makes us forget the rich and varied flora and fauna that make our planet so full of life. A trip to the zoo fascinates both the mind and the senses.
I remember when I was a kid; my parents took me to the nearby zoo. I can still recall the expression on my face when I saw a lion for the first time. Never did I think that an animal that I only saw on TV would be standing a few yards from me. It was frightening but exciting at the same time. And of ...
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No. of Different Words: 263 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.778 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.119 4.6
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