International community must ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly believed that governments from all countries must ensure their people to decrease using fossil fuels such as gas and oil due to their emission of the greenhouse gas. From my perspective, I strongly believed that they should apply the solution on cutting down the consumption of fossil fuels around the world for many reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable the fossil fuels’s consumption is the main reason of global warming and other environmental problems. Additionally, it can be clear that burning oil and coal in domestric and industrial activities is producing tons of carbon dioxide and other detrimental chemical problems per year. Moreover, with the fast developing era and overpopulation, a significantly number of transportations are being used worldwide, which is exhauted fumes and danger smokes in every part of the world. That is the reasons why a huge number of environmental problems are being alarming recently such as green house effects,global warming, and ice melting in all poses which leading to flood in lower areas of the sea.
On the other hand, the amount of fossil fuels in all over the world are being over used. Each kind of fossil fuels energies needs millions of years to form, therefore, with an enormous demand from mankind, it will result in the run out of energy in the future. Furthermore, technologies in producing alternative power resources have not reached the goal of replacing fossil fuels. One more thing is that not all nations can have the financial and technological resources to invest in finding an alternative power , so that the price can be extremely expensive.
In conclusion, it is critical that the International Community should take actions urgently to decrease the consumption of fossil fuels and other harmful energy in all nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1722972973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98580497454 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.1861699358 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24302283422 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890276057824 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843887142721 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159210205184 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078265777759 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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