Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?
Today we live in progressing world, in which more young people start to protect the environment, organize charitable activities and events in order to help poor people to solve their material problems, take care of the animals than previous generations. For some reasons, I wholeheartedly agree with this statement.
Let us start by considering the facts. The first thing that needs to be said is that, environmental destruction is one of the most global problems for today. Nowadays, mare and more young people ask themselves:” what can we live for the next generations?” So in order not to repeat our ancestry’s mistakes and let other problems such as global warming and extinction of some species of animals, people organize numerous environmental movements, for example, PETA, Green peace, etc. Furthermore, many young volunteers leave their motherland and begin to live and work in destitute countries. They organize charity events, funds from which go for the needs of poor people.
Another good thing is that, nowadays people take care of not only nature, but also they struggle for the animals’ lives and rights. Take an example, a lot of young people help in finding home for homeless dogs, cats and other pets. Moreover, they frequently become their “mothers", looking after them.
To draw the conclusion, one can surely say that today’s youngsters are more active than previous one. Personally, I am very proud of today’s youth, because they think about our mutual future and try to do everything in order to save and improve it.
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