In many countries, there are few people to earn extremely high salaries. Some say it is good thing for a country, others say that government should allow sharing at a certain level. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
Money is always in demand since it's discovery and everyone in this world works madly to earn more and more money to fulfill their desire. Well, during their journey of making money some are getting handsome packages while others, at limited scale. Providing high salary is good. However, I prefer to limit the salary distribution to certain extent.
Firstly, I would like to say the controlling to pay the higher salary would bring more equality among people, which will help people to same or near to same level. Because of inequality people are facing lot of problems. For example, students from the higher family or from the family with healthy wealth, get education from best schools and universities. On other hand, lower class students have to study in ordinary or government schools, where the education is very limited and staff are less careful towards students' education.
Secondly, I would like to add that poor people are getting more and more poorer and rich are getting more and more richer because of this policy. It has been said that 'Money brings power'. So, with more money, the world will be ruled by the rich people.
Where there are pros, there will be cons too. So, there are certain advantages of paying higher salaries too. Offer of higher salary show the stronger economy of the country. Sometime people who are getting higher start their own business and help others to earn and contribute toward the growth of country too.
In a nutshell, everything in certain limit is good for progress of anything while over doing spoils the thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91353383459 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24050373203 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.978213251 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125620193714 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411895643095 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339760183125 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711991974029 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332317340472 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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