The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
In 1990, the town was much greener with large amount of individual houses, but during the next 15 years the resort experienced the quantity of significant changes. The most noticeable feature of the maps is that almost 90% of all the trees were chopped down. Instead of them lots of skyscrapers were built. Moreover, a new supermarket was constructed to the north of skyscrapers.
Looking to the east of the resort, it is apparent that all the plants were demolished. They made way for the...
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