Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends? a. joining a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling

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Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends? a. joining a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. As far as I am concerned, traveling should be the most sagacious choice for you to make friends. Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are two conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for traveling is that it offers you golden chance to make friends with people who are quite different from your ordinary life. As you can imagine, during the trip, not only could you enjoy the clean atmosphere, the closeness to the nature and the gentle pace of living, but also the most wort...

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