Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
This is era of modernization which proves lucrative for mankind.Development in technology makes various things possible where those were thought impossible once.The root cause of globalization is modern technology which turns world into a global village.Many reasons are strode in front of us which prove that boundaries are no longer of that importance.And i agree with the statement.There are many reasons behind existence of single world culture.
To commence with,development in transportation is one of the most important cause of creating single world culture as it enables us to commute any where in small passage of time,growing trade is one of the example of advancement of transportation and globalization on account of growing import-export,we are using different things from different countries and exchange various goods and products.The availability of electronic gadgets is also a major reason behind this as internet and telephones enables people to interact with people living in overseas.Cable networks broadcast English channels which are frequently watched by entire globe and influence people towards new fad,trends introduced by TV channels especially of western culture and which results turning whole world into a global world.
Organization of international sports events also leads to globalization as international sports teams are invited by the host country which enables people to exchange their culture.vital function of tourism is knowing different culture and traditions of countries even people use to adopt those culture and rituals by living there.
Substantial advancement in the field of business and education especially in development countries allure people to go there for study and business as a result,single world culture is introduced.Modern technology allows English language langua franca and makes it international language which is domination whole of the world.
In a nutshell,modern technology is creating new single world culture where tradition and distance are no longer of that importance.
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