In this hectic life if parents are getting free time then they should spend this time in playing games with their children rather than helping them in their school work.
In modern era, every parent is busy in their work but they spend their free time with child. Variety of the activities can do with kids in free time. Different people have different attitude toward helping of children development. From my vantage point, I disagree with the statement that parents spend free time playing with their kids rather than helping on their academic work. I choose my stance for certain reasons which are describes in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, education play substantial role in person life. If parents only give attention to playing with their children as result, negative impact on child study because of most of children interested in to playing games than study. If parents do not take responsibilities to helping their child in homework, children also neglect their study and attract toward the playing game and other activities. Consequently, children get the low grade in exam. For example, my uncle and aunty not pay attention to my cousin study and always brought new games and playing with him. Gradually, my cousin takes less concentration on their study and engages to video game and playing business game with his father. Finally he fails in their exam and waste his one year for playing games.
Furthermore, parents spend time with playing with children it is also negative impact on children mind. All children have not developed mind, some kids need to helping their parents to solve doubt in some subjects. If it not solve at certain time child has moral down and they hate study. For an instance, my friend has problem in Maths, she tried to understand but she cannot did it. She also took the teacher helps, unfortunately he failed in maths exam. Her result in all subjects was good except maths. She concerned about study. In fact she went in depression for one month. If her parents gave some attention to her study she did not fail in exam.
However, child spend time with parents to playing game it is help to keep them healthier in both mentally as well as physically. Still, I firm to my point of view, since modern school now aware the physical and mental development of children, they organize the activities which are help to children keep fit and healthier.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons, parents should give time to children for helping in the school work. Playing games all free time it is negative impact on child study and kids also suffering from the depression and stress for study. Therefore, I disagree with statement that parents should free time spending with playing with children rather than bolster to study work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...gative impact on child study because of most of children interested in to playing games than stu...
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Line 2, column 706, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... playing business game with his father. Finally he fails in their exam and waste his on...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'solves'?
Suggestion: solves
...solve doubt in some subjects. If it not solve at certain time child has moral down an...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t she went in depression for one month. If her parents gave some attention to her ...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...to keep them healthier in both mentally as well as physically. Still, I firm to my point o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95011337868 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53397682685 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46485260771 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.378542075 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9615384615 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9615384615 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466154519438 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137540852546 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124564487469 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295560023443 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102280181218 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.