The graph below give information about total oil use if four main consumers from 2009 to 2030
The line graph demonstrates the amount of oil consumed by four contries during 22 - year period, from 2009.
Overall, it is evident that the amount of oil used by US and Western Europe and Japan is predicted to decrease while these figures in China and Middle East is expected to increase. US saw a significant reduction in consuming oil.
In 2009, US was the country consuming the largest amount of oi, at nearly 10 million barriers per day, while these figures of Western Europe and Japan was only 4 million barriers per day. The oil used by US remained around 10 million barriers per day until 2005 and then this is predicted to fall down remarkably to only more than 4 million barriers per day in 2030 but this will still the highest. In the same time, it is predicted that the consumed oil in Western Europe and Japan will steadily decline to more than 2 million barriers per day in 2030 and will become the lowest.
In constrast, from 2 million barriers per day in 2009, the amount of oil used by China an Middle East smoothly increased and it is forecasted that these figures will reache 3 million barriers per day for both consumers in 2030, which will higher than that of Western Europe and Japan but lower than that of US
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| 2021-07-26 | shubham0708 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50892857143 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33040663012 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.72291056 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.285714286 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174281720143 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115296360689 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714188605473 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151733391872 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729840034523 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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