The impact of tourism on a country, its advantages and disadvantages. How far it should be promoted.
Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries of the world. It plays a vital role in the economic development of a country. India has become a one of the popular tourist destinations as it offers a wide array of places to see and things to do which adds to the grandeur of the country and attracts tourist from all over the world. Here I would discuss, for and against the statement.
To commence with, besides attracting tourist, tourism brings along with it multifold avenues like foreign exchange, employment, exchange in culture and an overall development. A survey revealed that tourism i...
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Sentence: To conclude, its being emerging as a friutful industry which contributes in the development of economy, government should make sincere efforts that help to furthur develop Indian tourism.
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Error: furthur Suggestion: further
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