Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
We do not choose our family, they are gifted by god but friends are choosen by us. Friends and family are important aspects of ones life, both of them playing their own functions. In this globalised world, people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have adverse effect on community. I disagree with the statement.
In this modern era, people are likely to live with their friends because of ample of reasons. First and foremost is education. Childen move to mega cities for getting quality education as this is need of hour to get good job and bright career. Moreover, they get studious environment in the company of their friends, which they can not get while living with their family.
This trend proves productive in installing skills of socialization with that- they can learn to deal with the distinct people and learn to make good relations. Adaptability and flexibilty could be lucrative for youth of today's generation so they can learn to face ups and downs of life and can bulid never die attitude. While living away from families, people can feel the pulse of every stage of life.
On the other hand, others think that living far from families is likely to have negative impact on community. Their are multifarious reasons behind this as people living away from family may not aware about the cultures traditions of their families. To illustrate, a survey conducted by youth times magazine revealed that people living in mega cities, away from their families are more influenced by westernization. Families install moral ethics among children. Moreover, they have emotional and financial support.
In a nutshell, families and friends both are equally important. One should make good friends and stay in touch with the family too so that they can have a balance and happy life.
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Sentence: We do not choose our family, they are gifted by god but friends are choosen by us.
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Sentence: Adaptability and flexibilty could be lucrative for youth of today's generation so they can learn to face ups and downs of life and can bulid never die attitude.
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