Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both iews and give your own opinion.
The lifestyle of people hass been changed day by day, people love to travel more frequently to new place with new customs,traditions and behaviour as well. Some people say that visitors should learn and follow the local customs and behaviours of that particular country before travelling. However, other people argue that tourists, as consumers have a right to do what they want. In this essay we will discuss about relevant arguments.
Obviously, it is necessary for tourists , to know the local norms and values to some degree. Firstly, it will help them feel comfortable with local inhabitants and avoid conflicts during their trip. Secondly. if the traveller will obtain information before the visit then it will ease them to adopt to the new situations. If they will accept the people and their culture and values, accordingly local people will accept and welcome them which may fulfill the purpose of their visit. This will also help in communication and would definitely have a sense of respect to someone in a foreign country. In this way one may prevent oneself from getting into a situation of cultural misunderstanding. The more visitors will give respect to local culture the more they will receive love and kindness from local people and will enjoy the trip throughly.
However, for the visitors it may be difficult in some extent. As a host country, it is responsibility to show a warm welcome by trying to provide visitors with friendly surroundings with less cultural shocks. In addition, the more visitors will come, the country's economy is also improved, and will spread the informations of different cultures. The local people will also get opportunity to learn others cultures and traditions while staying in their own country. The host country should accept the cultural difference.
With all this taken into account, In this age I believe both the visitors and hosts should welcome cultiural differences. There are many nations accepting cultural differences which may help the travel industry and tourists may have more fun and love to visit that country again and again. However, a traveller should always remember to respect the customs and behaviours of their hosts.
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Sentence: The local people will also get opportunity to learn others cultures and traditions while staying in their own country.
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Sentence: The lifestyle of people hass been changed day by day, people love to travel more frequently to new place with new customs,traditions and behaviour as well.
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Sentence: With all this taken into account, In this age I believe both the visitors and hosts should welcome cultiural differences.
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