If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.
If I could invent something new, I would like to develop a flying car. Millions of people drive cars everyday on the road and they are important in everybody’s day-to-day life. It has become a necessity.
Nobody wants to reach late in the office and when because of long traffic jam you reach late it not only lowers your image but also bosses yelled at you. With flying car we can reach on time in the office and also there will be less traffic jams. For example, I always reach late in the office due to long traffic jam on my way even if I go early I always get traffic jam.
There is lot of parking problem wherever we go. I think people do not take rest at home on weekends. I always have to wait in the parking lot of a shopping mall. It has become a major problem. Flying car will not only maintains the traffic jam but also there will be less parking problem.
Flying car will be faster than normal cars. It will take half of the time than what we reach with normal cars. This car will save a lot of our precious time. These cars will be huge and there will be fewer chances of accidents.
Lastly, It would be fun when driving on roads as well as on sky. Isn’t it exciting?? It will be a joy ride for everyone. It works like a normal car and when it opens its wings to fly; it will become an airplane.
In conclusion, I would say if could get a chance to invent something new, I would like to develop a flying car because it will solve many problems of the people.
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Sentence: Flying car will not only maintains the traffic jam but also the there will be less parking problem.
Description: The fragment the there will is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace there with adjective
Sentence: It looks like a normal car and when it opens its wings to fly; will looks like an airplane.
Description: The word will is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to will
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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