The charts show the number of people using the internet from 1995 to 2002 and internet users in the world in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The charts illustrate the number of internet users in the world from 1995 to 2002 and the internet-user percentage in the world in 2003.
In general, there was a gradual increase of internet users from 1995 to 2002. In 2003, USA, Canada and Europe lead the number of internet users in the world.
Chart 1 showed a gradual increase from 1995 to 1999. There was a dramatic increase from 1999 to 2000. Then, there was a steady increase from 2000 onwards. The slight increase simply happened in the range of 1995 to 1996 and 1998 to 1999.
In chart 2, there were USA and Canada, and Europe mostly used the internet in 2003. The lowest proportion to use was in Middle East and Africa which represented 1% of the total users. Next, 6% of users, which was from South America, was the other lower number. It was lower than 15% of the users in Asia/Pacific.
Interestingly, the user number in the world, in 1995 and 2002, showed strong difference, which was about 22 times.
In conclusion, the internet users from 1995 to 2002 increased gradually. In the year of 2003, USA, Canada and Europe were the giant of internet users.
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