Some people believe that theoretical subjects should not be taught in universities because most student prefer to study practical subjects. Agree or disagree.
Many people contest that subjects on theories should be radically excluded from universities' curriculum and a skill specific educational structure should continue. I strongly disagree to this and I believe that traditional curriculums should be maintain and continuously develop.
In my point of view, theoretical subjects can wholly broaden a student's basic knowledge on a particular field. These subjects will provide an effective and efficient learning, as students will acquire technical and constructive various information. These sets of information are the key cores in order to correctly...
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Hi, sir/ma'am, what do you
Hi, sir/ma'am, what do you mean by sentence - sentence coherence? May you please specifically state an example, so I could surely improve it.
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1464 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.588 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.095 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.082 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5