Some people think that travel helps gaining knowledge, but others think that TV and internet play an important role in gaining knowledge. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Human being is a super creature and is always eager to learn new advancement. with the advent of time there are new stratagies to explore new advancements. some people believe that traveling is the best way to get knowledge while others insist that TV and internet are more preferred ways of getting new information. this essay will highlight both aspects of this topic and come to a definate result.
on one side people insist that best knowledge is gained by traveling and observing. one reason for this is that close observation and practical experience is the best way to learn . another reason for this believe is that traveling and moving around helps to get information with its applications to local enviorment. for example Columbus discovered a whole new world due to traveling. so traveling is the most important factor for gaining new technology.
on the other hand some people believe that social media is the best way to get knowledge. firstly they think that social media saves time compared to traveling. with one click some one can explore a vast variety of information. secondly, internet and TV are less expensive and convenient to all. so more people can get more benefits with social media. for example someone can get all information about space with internet but not that everyone can travel there.
In my opinion although both views are convincing but social media has more strong points. since it is observed that traveling is not safe anymore . so it is more convenient and safe to learn with help of TV and internet.Social media is less expensive, more time saving and more infotmative then traveling. although it is good to have practical experience with traveling but internet is more convenient to use.
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Sentence: With the advent of time there are new stratagies to explore new advancements.
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Sentence: This essay will highlight both aspects of this topic and come to a definate result.
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