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Working at home or working in the office,which is better?
With the development of the society, the working methods and conditions have changed over time.Nowadays, more and more employees would like to work at home rather than the office because they believe that working at home could offer more free spaces to them and thus they could augment their efficiency .But we must admit the irreplaceable advantages of working in the office.
First of all, I argue that working in the office could make employees focus their energy on their working project and they could boost their efficiency without plentiful distractions. In our own house, we may feel free a...
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Sentence: Although sometimes we possibly feel that time between home and company is tiresome and staying in the office from morning to evening is rigid, I must to say that, considering these situations, the advantages of working in the company overweigh its disadvantages.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: overweight
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Words: 506 350
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No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.743 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.862 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.199 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.389 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.56 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.249 0.07
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