The chart shows the percentage of total US population aged 65 and over between 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the information regarding the ratio of total US population based on different age groups, age 65 and above between 1900 and 2000. As an overall trend, we can clearly see that the ratio of total population growth incresed throughout the years.
The percentage of those between 65 and 74 incresed from about 2.9% in 1900 to aroound 7.3% in 1990. By 2000, it had come down to 6.5%. However, the 75-84 age group had a boom of 1% in 1900 and it has incresed by 3.4% in 2000.Similarly in 1900-1940, those aged 85 and above, the population growth was more or less very limited un...
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Sentence: As an overall trend, we can clearly see that the ratio of total population growth incresed throughout the years.
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Sentence: The percentage of those between 65 and 74 incresed from about 2.9 in 1900 to aroound 7.3 in 1990.
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Sentence: However, the 75-84 age group had a boom of 1 in 1900 and it has incresed by 3.4 in 2000.Similarly in 1900-1940, those aged 85 and above, the population growth was more or less very limited until 1950, afterthat rate gradually climbed up from 0.4 and reached to 1.5 in 2000.
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Sentence: To put it in a nutshell, the striking feature of the graph is that, there was a steady increse in the population of the elderly people in US during the entire period except in 2000
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