Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Networking is important in social life. Behaving well in society is a social etiquette. Among various people we meet in our life, neighbors are most important who we see daily. Having good relationship with neighbor will lead to harmonious environment in the surrounding. Every neighbor should be friendly enough, caring and should respect each other. These attributes makes the relationship bond stronger between neighbors.
Friendship between neighbors helps to improve bonding between them. The more friendly neighbours are, the more sharing of information is between neighbours. Eventually t...
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