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do you agree or disagree with
we should view the organizations and club activities as important as academic class
With the development of our world, the issues around us are becoming more perplexed so that we university students are supposed to be qualified to undertake various types of works. Some students hold the view that only do they the grasp the academic knowledge can they obtain more opportunities and lay a solid foundation for their career path. But other students are incline to give the same priority to academic courses and activities in autonomy clubs or organizations which belong to university. From my perspective, contemporary college students must view after-class activities as significant...
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Sentence: Some students hold the view that only do they the grasp the academic knowledge can they obtain more opportunities and lay a solid foundation for their career path.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to they and the
Sentence: Furthermore, we should not ignore the benefit derived from activities that we could entrenched our knowledge that we have learned in the classroom in our relative club.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to could and entrenched
Sentence: Take my mathematics model and application group as an example, I am major in economics and I often need to use quantitative methodology to analyze my economic problems.
Error: application Suggestion: application
Error: mathematics Suggestion: mathematics
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No. of Words: 589 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Still need to improve the language. Look, a lot of sentences start with the subject 'I'.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 589 350
No. of Characters: 2881 1500
No. of Different Words: 281 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.926 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.891 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.952 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 204 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 163 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 122 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 79 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.036 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.104 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.536 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.191 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5