some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
It has been extremely debatable issue that whether giving fixed punishment for each type of crime is acceptable or it is mandatory to analyze considerable aspects behind commited crime before determining punishment since crime is on the rise. Here, I will examine both sides with my own perception.
There are multifarious factors supporting fixed punishment. First and foremost, the vital function to encourage fixed punishment is played by the mentainence of equality for all types of criminals whether they are poor or rich. For example, Sometime, affulent people hire excellent lawyers who re...
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Sentence: It has been extremely debatable issue that whether giving fixed punishment for each type of crime is acceptable or it is mandatory to analyze considerable aspects behind commited crime before determining punishment since crime is on the rise.
Error: commited Suggestion: committed
Sentence: First and foremost, the vital function to encourage fixed punishment is played by the mentainence of equality for all types of criminals whether they are poor or rich.
Error: mentainence Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For example, Sometime, affulent people hire excellent lawyers who represent the facts in the manners via distortion to protect their clients from severe punishment which is fixed for very cruel act ultimately, size of punishment has to be curtailed just because of fake justifications.
Error: affulent Suggestion: affluent
Sentence: In such case, people who force them deserve more hardr punishment than inoccent kids. unlike fixed punishment, criteria of punishment can be modified as per demand of each type of case.
Error: hardr Suggestion: hard
Error: inoccent Suggestion: innocent
Sentence: To recapitulate, it is quiet evident that crime has been order of the day. curtailing severeness of punishment for those having negligible involvement in crime, offering rehablitation to culprits can be productive to bring lot of criminals at the path of morality as humanity's prime duty is to fortify humiliation of mankind.
Error: rehablitation Suggestion: rehabilitation
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Yes, ideas and representation are great!
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 2001 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.854 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.588 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Tnx sir , one more writer
Tnx sir , one more writer Tessy james I guess also wrote this same essay , she scored 8.0 and I also got 8.0
but if we compare ideas of both me and tessy , there is huge difference between ideas and representation ...she gave only one or 2 example that was about crime becouse of self defence
but my ideas were different I inserted example of slum boys and people committing suicide intetionally by coming in front of cars bus of innocent drivers
so I want to know what exactly make essays deserving 8.0 , are ideas have much greater role to play ..???????
my grammar , vocabulary , and other things are up to mark
I want to know about the role of ideas ...how much do ideas impact if one or two ideas are irrelevant or less valuable
She only got 7.5 not 8.0.
She only got 7.5 not 8.0.
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And we always think language is much more important than ideas.
We never think one idea is better than another idea. For example, you can apply following ideas to almost any essays or speakings.
reason 1: save time
reason 2: same money
reason 3: get more info
reason 4: make friends
You never got a bad mark because of ideas if you can put them properly.
sir I want to know that is
sir I want to know that is there any difference regarding evaluation and scoring of essay between testbig and real test in ielts exam.?????
one of my student inserted d same essay on testbig that she wrote in real ielts test ....bt she was scored 5.0 bands by testbig ...by contrast in real test she got 7.5 ...so why it happened ???????
We have evaluated over 30,000
We have evaluated over 30,000 essays for exams like TOEFL, IELTS, GMAT, GRE, SAT, ESL ... The mark is reasonable for most of users according to the feedback or very close to the real test. Read a real story:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/some-people-prefer-spend-their-live…
And we believe our rating system is more scientific than IELTS test, since we have an essay E-rater while there are only human graders for IELTS test.
And we don't believe that we marked an essay 5.0, but the same essay (if she didn't make any changes) could get 7.5 in real test. Can you please give us the link of her essay?
I m,desperate to know are my ideas and representation good according to demand of essay ?????????????