Successful people accept new things and take risks rather than hold on to the things that they have done well.
Achieve men has the character of risking and accepting rather than keeping old opinion. Which people who have one of the characters do you think? When face with the decision of tradition of advance, quite a few would deem that we can do well if we hold the old things, but others, in contrast, believe it as premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence it, there are three conspicuous aspects as follow.
The main reason is that the adventure spirit gives us more challenges and experience. If someone has adventure spirit, he will do what others can not accept. Sometimes he have no ideas about a question, he never give up and do his best to so this things until it has been solved by himself. In addition the people like that will also give themselves adventure that can have a risk or practice. For example, my brother is a man who is brave. He is my pattern because as a brother he is persistent, he never escape from the challenge just like a dog. He studies well but it is hard-working rather than talent. Ever time he meet problem, he will solve it even forget resting or sleeping. So he get champion in his class. Adventure spirit is the factor of success.
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