In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regards it as a hobby. To what extend, do you think this is a positive trend.
Once upon a time, a long long ago, shopping was a great factor and also a routine habitat for buying needed things to make a home in an extreme scenario. Nowadays, most of the people concerns shopping is a vital role and it acts as a hobby moreover, it is a part of enjoyment. However, I do think that this is a constructive trend.
To begin with, shopping plays a crucial role in our country indeed, in olden days this is mainly used to buy some household items because all people lived with a good plan and power. Moreover, they are saving money for their future to fulfill their children education and career development as well as their generation's. However, they had the capacity to overcome the hassles and menaces, when they are in the pathetic situations. Subsequently, in terms of shopping they will purchase household things, food items etc. They are not spending enormous amount of money for purchasing. They were keeping limitations to do anything like power consumption, water usage and mode of transportation. Furthermore, they would like to be in simplicity. For instance, my grant parents they are lived in such a way because, they did not have the policy like use and throw, still they are keeping their traditional valuable things without any disruption.
Evidently, at present above criteria become changed due to the life style modification owing to that all are living in fantasy world moreover, day dreamers as a hobby they entered into shopping. However, people doesn't have the issues like economic scarcity, improper dietary pattern etc. hence, these all are begins to happen due to the expansion of advanced technology. Consequently, all are not in workaholic in order to that, they will be free for average timings per day, so, they will choose to go for shopping. Furthermore, shopping have been set up in different categories such as online shopping on account of shopclues, amazone, e bay etc.
To sum up, in my belief, extremely this concept being a constructive one. However, we should follow the new trends which are allotted by the government or similar authorities, because, it will not be affect for our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7787145625 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2178540069 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988673947645 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384887937946 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570029010793 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767648683101 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649554398346 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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