Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than the any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
My writing
In accordance with researchers, humans’ characters are effected mostly by our natural features, meanwhile, experiencing is thought to be powerless in changing them. I am of the opinion of disagreement because experiencesplay a vital role in forming our skills.
On the one hand, there are more than eight billion people in the world but each of them is a unique individual with exclusive characteristics. Some people were born with kind and easy-going character and alsothe opposite ones.These kinds of indentity will be formed and improved along their growup so that this lead to a wide range of people believe these genetic traits will impact people’ life significantly.
On the other hand, along with a myriad of people, I strongly think that experiences have the most important influence on our social skills. Firstly, the environment that children are brought up will have the direct effects on their personality. For example: the child who was born as a happy person but in a broken family, he easily become a pessimistic one. Secondly, our experiences in life will broaden our mind, help us get fitted and perfect human beings. Throughout life, from communities and education, we can learn and change ourselves to be the useful ones in the world.
In conclusion, I agree that our genetic characteristics play a small part in the process of forming our character nut experiences that we gain from life will help us to be the perfect and qualified ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...ing character and alsothe opposite ones.These kinds of indentity will be formed and i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12704918033 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03416838274 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6768106355 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.1 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273041892435 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998029373422 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056608093484 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157595190287 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732403117069 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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