The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of the student attending the four different secondary schools in 9 years period from 2000 to 2009. Overall, it can be seen that voluntary control school is the most popular school in 2000.
To begin with, the popularity of the specialist school remained almost same throughout the period, at 11 %. In 2000, the most favorite school was voluntary-control school, at 52% which significantly declined in 2005, at 38% and more remained one fifth in 2009. The Grammar school was the second desirable school with students in 2000, at 24% it significantly dropped up to 1...
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remained almost same throughout the period
remained almost the same throughout the period
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most students obtaining education in community school
most students obtain education in community school
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