Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products , or is it the responsibility of producers?
Because of the modernization and globalization, most of the products are available all over the world. This booms the packaging industry in almost all the sectors. This creates over packaging sometimes which can cause many detrimental effects. I believe that as over packaging is introduced by the manufacturers, it is their responsibility to take care of it.
To star with, almost all the businesses have understood the importance of packaging. They started using lucrative but unnecessary packages to attract consumers and increase the sales. For instance, the food industry is the one which uses it more than any other industry. For example, many fast food chains use colorful and interesting packages. These increase the aesthetic appeal and consumer might ignore the negative consequences of the food. They might spend more than required overlooking the quality. Moreover, the price of packaging ultimately come to the shoulder of the customers.
In addition to this, most of the items are wrapped in plastic or paper which are harmful to the environment and as well as the planet as a whole. For example, usage of paper means cutting more and more trees which may lead to deforestation. Similarly, plastic is a material which can not be destroyed without adverse effects on the environment. Usage of it means an increase in pollution.
To conclude, although I feel that packaging is necessary to deliver the product to the customers without affecting its quality, overuse can cause inauspicious impacts not only on the individuals but also on the mother earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2371541502 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97794021423 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2375757222 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8125 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143398122294 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457704522372 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525759298884 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856325055407 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745517517307 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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