Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
Over-packaging of food products has become a trend to make it look attractive to customers. Some people opine that over-packaging should be avoided by buyers while others believe that it should be eliminated by the producers. This essay will discuss why the producers should avoid over-packaging in order to reduce the item prices and help to combat the harmful effects on the environment.
Firstly, overpackaging of the eatables costs more to the consumers, because the money is shelled out from their pockets for the shimmery packagings. It eventually increases the market price of the actual product and can become non-affordable for some people. Manufacturers should pay attention to the price rather than packaging.
Secondly, lots of wrapping material is made of paper and plastic and it should be avoided since paper wraps come from cutting down trees and plastic is already a major contributor to climate change. For example, amazon use plastic to cover the products then puts them in a cardboard box and then seals it in a plastic bag. rather it can just send the item in the box avoiding two layers of plastic covering. Hence, producers can eliminate over-packaging.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that it becomes the responsibility of the producers to avoid the over-packaging of foods at their level so that it doesn't cause the value of the goods to inflate and this will also help in reducing plastic pollution.
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- Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07391304348 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92589313913 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569565217391 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1158168534 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.7 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265026054672 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10080478674 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762152611323 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156462701585 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108449947122 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.