Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own life. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens lead a good life.
Regarding to technologies development and significant changes which have been combined with people's life in recent century; crisis social and financial problems that have been imposed on communities, people and society's condition is not as convenient as the past. There has been a lot of controversy surrounding this matter. While some people believe it is quite the singular duty to pay attention to their life, others completely reject these words and believe that governments play the most important roles to guarantee their citizens life.
Those who believe that everybody's life quality assurance is depending on individuals acts argue that people dominate much and better over their circumstances. So they can perform an appropriate action due to their conditions at the earliest time. Moreover, no one is responsible for the others life quality and the number of efforts that they should make to have a decent life. In addition, no one knows about the others exact financial and personal difficulties and possible solutions that can be made in each situation. As a result, people are responsible for all their achievements, success, and even suffers.
In contrast, there are people who hold the opinion that the contribution of governments to prepare a good and suitable level of life should not be ignored. Although a large number of people make a lot of attempts, try and overcome any kind of excruciating problems every day, why they have no life's appropriate state and they have to struggle to just live. All above shows that the overall dominated situation that governments are responsible for, is not satisfactory. There should be an adequate atmosphere and opportunities until people's endeavor will be efficient.
Taking both sides into account, it can be argued that both of people and governments responsibilities are necessary. They must be united to prepare a good life quality, and it is not reasonable to take just one side into consideration. Having a lucrative and distinguished society, especially high levels of life's satisfaction is required a multitude factors that one of them is to unify the governments and people.
- Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamor and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. 89
- you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.however, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.you also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. 62
- You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement 86
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own life. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens lead a good life. 73
- You live in a room in the college dormitory which you share with three other students. However, there are many problems with this arrangement, and you find it very difficult to study 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... that everybodys life quality assurance is depending on individuals acts argue that people d...
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Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...Moreover, no one is responsible for the others life quality and the number of efforts ...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of life should not be ignored. Although a large number of people make a lot of attempts, try and ...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...umber of people make a lot of attempts, try and overcome any kind of excruciating probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24418604651 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02182434805 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0215888944 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.266666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363227677733 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114013057727 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918316201321 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2137130824 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503417815672 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.