"It is dangerous to trust only intelligence."
Intelligence is having profound knowledge of everything. Human beings are treated special because of there intelligence or smartness which helps them to solve there problem and also, to make right decisions. This what makes them stand out from other creatures in earth. But trusting only intelligence is highly dangerous because high intellectual makes a person arrogant and superior who tend to make wrong choice which leads in destruction of nation.
Intelligence is not always gaining knowledge from university or colleges, it includes the ideas, knowledge how to tackle the problems. Everyone got the intelligence but only few knows how to use it. If we do not give work to our brain then it will be shut down forever with lack of creativity and imagination. For example a person will get selected from reputed university based on his intelligence only so its not always dangerous as we think it depends on how we miss use it.
We always think that going to college makes us intelligent that is not always correct for example Bill gates an college drop out student, he did not complete his education but today he is founder of Microsoft company. Because of his ideas, team work, and his audacity helped him to succeed his dreams.
Intelligence is not dangerous, it depends on person how he use or miss use it. Intelligence becomes dangerous because of our personalities few who want become intelligent will work hard and become scholars to serve the nation, to develop the society with there knowledge and intelligence. But others after gaining knowledge they will miss use it to destroy the nation with there hacking skill, and many more.
In conclusion trusting intelligence is not always dangerous it depends on how we interpret it. But only intelligence is not enough to be successful it requires other attributes like creativity, team work, patience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84433374288 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9777293422 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124470233095 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493741253663 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625526136352 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080011450089 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536697042491 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.