Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Modern advancements, at present, is becoming a popular trend in monitoring people's actions and words. On most occassions, subjects under close observation are not aware of the situation they are in. Personally, I favor the advantages than the harms it may cause.
The increasing usage of tracking technology in surveying people's daily routine causes some to feel insecure, others see it as invasion of privacy. One good example, is proliferation of security cameras or CCTV's, most establishments install CCTV's as a way to deter any potential shoplifters and other wrongdoers. However, there had been cases in which these cameras were put in hidden places, most notably in trial or fitting rooms, clearly an invasion of privacy. Another example, citizens are put under cellphone surveillance, thus losing any sense of nights to privacy, a huge number of messages and phone calls are filtered by government for security purposes.
In spite of these seen flaws, others are in favor of such close monitoring. Case in point with the continous fight against terrorism, with the help of cellphone trackers and security cameras, Allied force were able to track down and neutralize the world's top terrorist Osama bin Laden. Still, another good example where CCTV's can be of great assistance is during a crime. The abundance of cameras amongst all highposts and other installations can make a great deal of help as they can record all the events that happened in a given time, this can be useful if there are no witnesses to a certain crime.
In summary, it is widely accepted that monitoring people with the use of technology brings many draw bucks, but then again, the usefulness still outweighs the flaws, considering it entails the safety and security of the larger number of the population, I am personally in favor of the letter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m personally in favor of the letter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, in summary, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10264900662 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78394125889 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9368068297 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195143437506 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572550655361 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486570461377 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106000546223 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351827233048 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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