In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Increasing tendency in crime rates has become a major problem in almost every country. Many sociologists believe that criminals are not born to commit crimes there are few circumstances which influence them to do it.
There are few main causes which are widely assuming to for committing any crime. For example, underdeveloped countries like Pakistan, India, Bangladesh are suffering from poverty and misery. This agony of starvation or unable to pay the education fee for their children or lack of affording medical fee have become the main reasons to commit the crimes. Other causes of crime varies according to situation. People are tend towards the luxury lives and to make it possible they find various unethical ways to commit crimes. For example, in a tax department, a tax officer detect a tax evasion, however, the tax officer has had a negotiation with that person and compromise his ethical duties over his luxuries. This behavior has ultimately converted into a crime.
Citizens of any country may get equal opportunities to work in their country and must get equal rights for wages and other facilities. Unethical behavior of any citizen should not be tolerated. Bribe, dowry and other ridiculous system should completely be eliminated from the society. Education, medical facilities must be provided free or for very minimal amount to those who do not afford to pay for it.
Generally, it is widely believe that any country who promotes education system eventually demoting the crime rates. Also, developing equal opportunities for every citizen who wants his family to live a standard life, would not break the shackle of ethical values and eventually refrain from committing the crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
... pay for it. Generally, it is widely believe that any country who promotes education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22909090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73181198003 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3550714706 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158271744519 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617596897855 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679107782403 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951312234895 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440226898957 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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