Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to so much information creates problems. Which do you agree with?
Although some people believe that accessing to so much information creates problems, I think that the positive aspects of the internet are more valuable; as you know the internet provides people with a lot of precious information.
If we have a quick look at our today world, providing valuable information at the least time is at the first level of importance. For example, you are working at your office; suddenly your boss wants some immediate information about the stock market; in this emergency situation the best way for fulfilling the desire is searching through the internet. In contrast with the previous times that finding the information was an overwhelming and time consuming process; today, doing these kinds of works takes a minimum time that it is not comparable with the past. On the other word, the scale of time in our daily life is not comparable with the past.
Accessing to the recent information at various levels is another positive aspect of the internet; it helps you to remain up-to-date with the modern world at any moment. For instance my field is chemistry; scientists do a lot of researches in all fields of this science such as environmental, organic, food, bio-inorganic areas and so on. Having knowledge about the new scientific achievements and being aware about daily events make you a person knowledgeable and caring who concerns about the events in the whole world. With the mentioned trend, after a while, you will figure out that without the internet, it is like that you have lost something.
To put the issues into a nutshell, searching through the internet is not only problematic but also it helps you to keep your data up-to-date and proceed your work easier, faster and more efficient.
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