some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to so much information creates problems. Which do you agree with?

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some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Other think access to so much information creates problems. Which do you agree with?

In 1970s, when the Pentagon started using computer network between its military sites, later becoming known as internet, no one would ever, in next decades,predict such communication medium will become so routine for every one that living in a world with no internet access is almost unimaginable. With internet, any kind of information are at our fingertips. However some believe this is not always useful. Although being exposed to millions of uncertified and probably contradictary information may be harmful sometimes, I believe, overally, information provide by the internet is helpful to the...

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Sentence: With internet, any kind of information are at our fingertips.
Description: The fragment kind of information is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is

information provide by the internet is helpful
information provided by the internet is helpful

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