Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient’s health, no matter how rich they are?
Doctors are the individuals with charisma in intelligence to this world. Over growth of population density has a direct effect of disease transmission which in turn increase the number of patients. At this point of dilemma, doctors are the only lime light.
There are wide varieties of doctors and each doctor is specialised into a specific area. For example, surgeon is a doctor who deals with operations at the theatre whereas a cardiologist is a doctor who is specialised in heart related diseases. Likewise a doctor is a person who deals with patients despite rich or poor.
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Sentence: Over growth of population density has a direct effect of disease transmission which in turn increase the number of patients.
Description: The fragment turn increase the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace increase with verb, past tense
Sentence: There are wide varieties of doctors and each doctor is specialised into a specific area.
Error: specialised Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For example, surgeon is a doctor who deals with operations at the theatre whereas a cardiologist is a doctor who is specialised in heart related diseases.
Error: specialised Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In fact this doesn't count entirely on doctors but on all the external expenses such as electricity, machinary analysis and of course their effort and knowledge.
Error: machinary Suggestion: machinery
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
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No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1273 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.859 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.684 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.783 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.615 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5