It is more important at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low , Than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
Everyone want to enjoy their life but sometimes they have to live life according to the situations. Sometimes situations do not help them to do what they want to do. Everyone have goals,hobies,dreams but some can achieve their dreams but others can not. Some do their work in their interests but others have to do according to the situations. Some have to concentrate on money by leaving aside their dreams and hobbies.
I support that it is more important to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy than to work at a job that you enjoy,even if the salary is low. In today's world money is a major factor. We can not live happily if we do not have enough wealth. We have to compromise with our choices,living standards
or sometimes dreams also. If we are working in a high paying job, we have so many benefits. We can
live life easily without worrying about money factor. Our living standard will be high. We can use
many facilities. We can save more amount moeny more future. We can also invest some money in mutual
funds or share market.We do not have to compromise on dreams due to money. Consider the case, if one
is enjoying doing painting. So he/she decided to be a drawing teacher.But he/she is not getting
enough money Other he/she does not like engineering but he/she decided to do it for bright future and he/she gets job in high-paying company.
Life is beautiful for both but second one does not have to worry about money.If we are not interest in a work but we have to do.
We can do whatever our hobbies in free time. We can also do on weekends to make also money from them.
Some times working in not interested field feels like tedious but we have to do due to other
benefits. SO people continue their work if they are not enjoying. They start finding way to make
it interesting or rather they start to loving their work and do hardwork in them.
If our salary is low but we are enjoying than it is good in view of happiness. We are satisfied
with our work that we are doing what we have dreamed. But we always have to worry about money.
Money becomes major worry in our day to day life. We can't invest much money for future.
According to me, it is better to work at high paying job if we are not enjoying it because
it has so many benefits. We can other works in free time which we are enjoying. We can start taking
interest in our job and make it enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hobies
...hat they want to do. Everyone have goals,hobies,dreams but some can achieve their dream...
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Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , even
...joy than to work at a job that you enjoy,even if the salary is low. In todays world m...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , living
.... We have to compromise with our choices,living standards or sometimes dreams also. If...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s,living standards or sometimes dreams also. If we are working in a high paying job...
^^^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng job, we have so many benefits. We can live life easily without worrying about ...
^^^
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...living standard will be high. We can use many facilities. We can save more amount...
^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can save more amount moeny more future. We can also invest some money in mutual ...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... We can also invest some money in mutual funds or share market.We do not have to ...
^^^
Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...money in mutual funds or share market.We do not have to compromise on dreams due...
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Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...money in mutual funds or share market.We do not have to compromise on dreams due...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... he/she decided to be a drawing teacher.But he/she is not getting enough money Oth...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h-paying company. Life is beautiful for both but second one does not have to wor...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... one does not have to worry about money.If we are not interest in a work but we ha...
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Line 11, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e tedious but we have to do due to other benefits. SO people continue their work ...
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Line 16, column 53, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... major worry in our day to day life. We cant invest much money for future. Accordi...
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Line 16, column 88, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
.... We cant invest much money for future. According to me, it is better to work at high paying jo...
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Line 19, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erest in our job and make it enjoyable.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41255605381 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45582438662 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387892376682 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4848038175 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4838709677 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3870967742 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.806451612903 5.45110844103 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.53405017921 419% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277316870299 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904673403071 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164092573012 0.0737576698707 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10508427784 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130364152641 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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