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Does modern technology make life more convenient or was the life better when technology was simpler?
Continuous growth of modern technology made it obvious that life is about to change into a new chapter. Turning back to the past centuries, the 21st century is all about electronic era. Many people doubt whether the world would be converted to a super millennium or an absolute downfall in near future.
Advance technology merits appreciation based on all the unlimited benefits to both young and old. Modern technology created great inventions. Introduction of computers made the most phenomenon turning point of the world, this invention made time shorter, life smarter and reduced workload. Book...
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Sentence: Socially, it's strongly unaccepted because technology could stands as a barrier between the social lives of human beings.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to could and stands
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No. of Words: 253 350
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.867 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 253 350
No. of Characters: 1447 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.988 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.719 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.017 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.136 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5