You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- Explain why you want to take time off work
- Give details of the amount of time you need
- Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request for some unpaid leave next month.
May parents 50th wedding anniversary is on July 20th and our family is planning to celebrate this significant achievement will all their children and grandchildren. A big hall on a famous resort has been rented which will be enough to accommodate the whole family.
To participate on this special occasion, I would need to be away from work for three days, from Monday 19th to Wednesday 21st. As one of the children I am oblige to take part of the entourage.
My job during those days will be relatively light, apart from the daily reports for fund managers. Mr. Jose would be able to perform my responsibility as he has been my backup in the past two years.
I would be grateful if you will allow me this time. These few days are very important as it would be my way of showing thank you for all the support they have provided to me.
I am looking forward to your kind approval.
Yours faithfully
Julius Michael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ys, from Monday 19th to Wednesday 21st. As one of the children I am oblige to take...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obliged'.
Suggestion: obliged
...sday 21st. As one of the children I am oblige to take part of the entourage. My jo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64640883978 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56295240073 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6256023263 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163818564037 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618930858921 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523709685143 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739312302438 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497076949689 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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