TOEFL essay: Food is now easier to prepare, Is this a good thing?

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TOEFL essay: Food is now easier to prepare, Is this a good thing?

The never-ending growth of technology leads us to better, faster and easier life style. The old fashioned ways of planting, rising and harvesting are only found in museums todays. This is also correct about the ways they raised chicken and cows for their meat. Not only the initial steps towards having food has changed, but also the method for cooking food has been affected widely. We can have our soup, fries and even pizza prepared within 5 minutes! Great thanks goes to the food incorporations which pre-bake and freeze most of the food. Where they just need a five minutes turn in the microwave...

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Sentence: The way animals are raised in stressful ways, plus putting antibiotics in there food and water will be another health harming issue.
Description: The fragment in there food is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace there with adjective

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Don't use 'not only ... but also' a lot of times in one essay

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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 410 350
No. of Characters: 1918 1500
No. of Different Words: 229 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.678 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.33 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.062 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5