Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Do you consider that the population's will is not being accomplished by the goverment? Think about it and it is probable that you are disappointed with the government for a number of reasons which you consider should be solved immediately. However, it is important to notice that there are primary needs that deserve to be taken into account first by government officials. Therefore, government officials should rely in their own judgment to take their decisions.
First, government officials are well-prepared people who have a previous technical background in their field. Consequently, before th...
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Sentence: For instance, you think that a new highway is necessary for enhance certain zone of your country.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and enhance
Sentence: For example, solutions of internal conflicts which are prone to became in a internal war will be carry out first than small conflicts.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to to and became
Sentence: The commucation of this desire by the people from there, will be main source of information so that the government carry out this issue.
Description: The fragment government carry out is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace carry with verb, past tense
Sentence: Do you consider that the population's will is not being accomplished by the goverment?
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
Sentence: For example, in Peru, there was a conflict between population of Cajamarca and enterprises dedicated to explote minerals.
Error: explote Suggestion: explore
Sentence: Nevertheless, the government decided that the explotation of mineral went on because the revenues gained were huge for all the country and specially for the people from Cajamarca.
Error: explotation Suggestion: exploration
Sentence: Other people think that combating the deliquency and etcetera.
Error: etcetera Suggestion: ?
Error: deliquency Suggestion: delinquency
Sentence: The commucation of this desire by the people from there, will be main source of information so that the government carry out this issue.
Error: commucation Suggestion: computation
Sentence: In a nutshell, based on their own judgment, goverment officials should take their decisions.
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
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